Fenced
Nikon D100--Warren
posted by Warren T. at 7:37 AM
4 comments
Friday, March 24, 2006
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4 Comments:
Nice photo. I like the way the fence just gradually disappears.
Ej
I agree with Eric - I really like this one, too. You rendered the fog and the "disappearing act" so well.
I also like the way you've abstracted this scene to a combination of simple shapes (hey, how about that for Art School Talk, Eric? ;-) - and you know how much I like that sort of thing.
One suggestion you might try - I covered up a small part of the right-hand edge - so that the entire pole- the one with the knob at the top- is just barely included. I found that I liked the overall composition better when I didn't see that little separate bit of fencing mesh at the extreme right.
-- SteveR
Thanks guys.
My original crop on this shot showed more of the fence on the right side including a yellow "Caution" sign.
My next crop was exactly like Steve suggested.
While reviewing that one, I decided that it felt "incomplete" to me (I don't know why, it's just a feeling). It felt a bit too static.
So on this final crop, I showed a bit more of the fence on the right. I felt that it gave a "beginning" to the leftward flow, and it gave a hint at what was on the right side of the scene (outside of the picture). I guess it "opens" the image on the right side, in Gestalt terms. So perhaps for me, it "flows" better.
Or maybe I just had too much coffee this morning :).
--Warren
The fog kind of sucessfully added an "open to imagination" mood to this simple yet thought-catching shot. The title did put in more.PAT
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