Monday, September 16, 2013

Irving Street Version 3

Lea, I changed your suggestion to include the entire foreground shadow (gave it more space on the right).

--Warren

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Sunday, September 15, 2013

Irving Street, Version 2

Olympus E-P1, Olympus 17mm f2.8

Edited per Lea's suggestions, is this version better?

--Warren

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Blogger Lea said...

The vertical crop is off... We aren't seeing the big apple shaped shadow plopped on the ground and the wide lines from the sidewalk that lead us in like train tracks. :( Shift the crop downward all the way so there is nothing cut off from the bottom. :)

Monday, September 16, 2013 at 8:28:00 AM PDT  

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Saturday, September 14, 2013

Irving Street

Olympus E-P1, Olympus 17mm f2.8

Does this picture do anything for anyone? I'd like to know. :)

Interesting, or not?

--Warren

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Anonymous Anonymous said...

I must say I have a soft spot for sepia, I like the shadows on the sidewalk.

Dan

Saturday, September 14, 2013 at 10:40:00 PM PDT  
Blogger Lea said...

I'm really drawn to the shadows and lines of the sidewalk. I think some cropping on the left (until half the tree), right (until half the pillar), and the top (until the lower portion of the space between balcony corners) might improve the impact. For me anyways :)) Great textures and exposure!

Sunday, September 15, 2013 at 8:51:00 PM PDT  

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