Sunday, February 12, 2012

the warmth of a child

8 Comments:

Blogger Warren T. said...

A ray of warmth in a sea of darkness (cold)... very nice, Joe.

Do you have any where the child is looking directly at you? IMO, that would make it even 'warmer'.

Monday, February 13, 2012 at 10:48:00 PM PST  
Blogger Dolph Brust said...

Really nice lighting. The composition is what every parent would pay for, to capture youth and that moment in time.

**Dolph

Tuesday, February 14, 2012 at 4:07:00 PM PST  
Blogger dan in marin said...

I believe Warren has raised a fundamental approach to how one goes about capturing an image, do you make yourself part of the image or remain anonymous. The first image seems to create a sense that the photographer was not part of the scene, and IMO more effective. The second image with the child looking directly into the lens has more of a staged or created scene. In the hundreds of family scenes I have captured, the most effective for me and my family are more candid. Obviously, portrait work requires one to set the scene and manipulate all of the variables. Guess it all goes to what one is trying to achieve. However, I vote for the first image as evoking more emotion and creating a sense of story.

Dan

Wednesday, February 15, 2012 at 7:14:00 AM PST  
Blogger Warren T. said...

What a great discussion topic!

First of all, a big thanks to Joe for posting a couple of very compelling and excellent pictures.

Secondly, all opinions are valid and good, so I hope that some other people will speak up!

I will be posting more about this later, when I have time because this deserves more time to compose a post.

Keep it rolling!

--Warren

Wednesday, February 15, 2012 at 9:53:00 AM PST  
Blogger Dolph Brust said...

Sometimes it is a story, and sometimes it is the light and all the other elements that will not happen again and we need to capture the moment. I think that it is more difficult to put yourself into the picture, be part of the story. The challenge is composition of the feeling, and not just the elements of a good picture.

**Dolph

Wednesday, February 15, 2012 at 9:03:00 PM PST  
Blogger Warren T. said...

This is not a critique because Joe didn't ask for one. Both pictures are excellent in their own ways, and each of them invoke different reactions in me. Instead, this is just a documentation of my own reactions when first seeing them.

"the warmth of a child": this is from the viewpoint of an observer because the child was gazing outside the frame. Who or what was the child looking at? The background is so dark that the arm looks disconnected, which causes a bit of visual tension or mystery when combined with the outward gaze. The child's face is secondary to the other visual elements in the image, upper right is dominated by hair, lower left is dominated by the barely lit arm, and then the coldness of the dark.

"looking at me": The eyes gaze directly at me, in vivid and sharp focus. There is a direct connection between the photographer (and thus the viewer). The image is about the child and his relationship photographer. There is enough light on the arm and shoulder to know how the child is positioned in the picture. It's possible to have a candid with the subject looking directly at the camera. This does not give me the impression of being posed, the expression seems honest.

Both are excellent, and the omission of any description to go with them forces us to guess the intent of the photographer.

--Warren

Friday, February 17, 2012 at 7:57:00 AM PST  
Blogger back alley said...

just an fyi...i am always open to feedback on any image posted.
some background on the shots and this may be disappointing to some...his name is kayden, child of friends of mine. we were in a small restaurant for b'fast. i had just finished a session of tickling him and generally harrasing him. he looked up, was sitting in a spotlight of sunshine, i had the d90 with 40 lens on it and in the period of maybe 30 seconds i took about 6 or 8 shots of him. only one with him looking away and the rest with him looking at me.
he is a cute kid with these amazing blue eyes and is easy to photograph.

Friday, February 17, 2012 at 3:53:00 PM PST  
Blogger dan in marin said...

Guess that is my point, I prefer images that are less staged, not to say some great photographers, Avendon or Arbus comes to mind, do not produce incredible images that are fully staged. How many ways to create a story through an image, my guess is you cannot create the formula or recipe as to what works or does not.

Friday, February 17, 2012 at 9:56:00 PM PST  

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