I'm interested in comments about this one. I like it a lot but my instructor wasn't impressed. Tell me what you think?
posted by Unknown at 7:13 PM
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Saturday, October 23, 2004
I'm interested in comments about this one. I like it a lot but my instructor wasn't impressed. Tell me what you think?
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2 Comments:
Nice shapes, use of negative space. I would crop the top part of the photo out. Light areas attract the viewer. Nice opening shot maybe. Why are you doing this story in color? It may be too challenging for beginners and black and white done well can convey mood a bit better.
I like the way the tree limb on the left mimics the angle of the man's head. On the other hand, the man is doing something that does not appear related to the approaching bus, kind of a mixed message. I understand the framing of the bus by the tree and the object on the right. It's a good idea. However, the object on the right is simply a black straight line with no detail. To me, it doesn't have enough distinction. It looks simply like the picture was masked on the right, or like a shutter malfunction. Perhaps a tighter crop would help, and the tighter crop might also bring more attention to the 48 bus.
--Warren
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